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Roses he said...

Roses he said,
smells like the breathe on your lips
as you laugh with the summer sun,
bouncing through your hair as you run.

White for your innocent wishes,
and sweet first kisses.                    
When It steals your air
and all the wonderful words you wanted to share.

Silver for strands of moonlight in your hair
the stars reflecting in your eye and mine
the silent nights where all I could do is stare,
cause to look away and risk you disappearing
was something that couldn't be beared.

Golden roses
for the sunny days and summer sunsets     
embraces that hold on as tight as hope
and never really let go, from the first time we met.

Yellow as bright as lightning bugs
for the promises I make
when everything will be alright someday
and the unsetteling doubt thats hard to shake.

Azure for the tears staining your cheeks
the goodbyes in my eyes
and the distance in sighs,
the beat of your heart as It slowly dies.

Black roses
to tear at your heart
marking eveything you ever say
so you remember my name
every second of every day that im away.

Red roses for the end
the passion that crushes your body to mine
the triumph and defeat
the smoldering incompacitating heat
like the feeling of being together,
of finally being complete.
:iconlovelyhikari12:

Author's Comments

This is a random piece of utter rhyming crap. Seriously. It sounded like a good idea at first, but It didn't really go anywhere, cause as you can see It really has no purpose. But It rhymes. It sounds a bit better If you read It while listening to a pretty song though. But only a little. So I apologize for subjecting you to this. Its sucks. :faint:

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:iconbleedingroses13:
how on earth so you say that sucks chickface? your nuts. thats one of my favorite poems iv ever read.

--
Don’t be scared of change because it will change you. If you run from faith, faith will believe you are lost. Don’t hide from what you fear, because you will turn into it. Don’t destroy what you have, because one day you will love it. -me
:iconlovelyhikari12:
=] thank you

--
*Andrew-R.I.P* :damphyr:

"Don't say you love me unless you really mean it, because I might do something crazy like believe it."
:iconl33t-k0k1r1:
t3h lady's rite y'know.

you had me at roses,
though i don't know why,
nothing made a difference,
whether i laughed or i cried,
you had me at roses,
and for you i would die.


that my little friend, is utter randomness. too short and just random.

"i love your poems as much as i do you"

--
If I ever leave "Of course...I'll come back to you. Even if you don't promise to wait. I'll return knowing you'll be here." ~Loveless (finale)
:iconlovelyhikari12:
D'awwwww >/////<
lol I don't think u love me yet, you haven't been around me when I'm really annoying

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*Andrew-R.I.P* :damphyr:

"Don't say you love me unless you really mean it, because I might do something crazy like believe it."
:iconl33t-k0k1r1:
annoying?
you?
never.
even so i live with women so annoying is easy to handle

--
If I ever leave "Of course...I'll come back to you. Even if you don't promise to wait. I'll return knowing you'll be here." ~Loveless (finale)
:iconlovelyhikari12:
pft
i get hyper
and i sing
a lot

--
*Andrew-R.I.P* :damphyr:

"Don't say you love me unless you really mean it, because I might do something crazy like believe it."
:iconl33t-k0k1r1:
as do i,
not as often as i used to though.
i need waaaaaay more sugar than i used to

--
If I ever leave "Of course...I'll come back to you. Even if you don't promise to wait. I'll return knowing you'll be here." ~Loveless (finale)
:iconlovelyhikari12:
=]

Random: do you like Michael Jackson?

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*Andrew-R.I.P* :damphyr:

"Don't say you love me unless you really mean it, because I might do something crazy like believe it."
:iconl33t-k0k1r1:
what he did=no
his music=very much so

--
If I ever leave "Of course...I'll come back to you. Even if you don't promise to wait. I'll return knowing you'll be here." ~Loveless (finale)

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